Researching on the lower ninth ward gave me an opportunity
to learn more about Hurricane Katrina and how money played a huge difference
between the rich and the less privileged. Before hurricane Katrina hit New
Orleans, only few Americans knew about the lower ninth ward, until hurricane
exploded this place. On August 29, 2005, Hurricane Katrina made landfall on the
gulf coast of the United States, east of New Orleans with the “storm’s eye”
passing within 10 to 15 miles of the city. The effect on New Orleans, as well
as on the entire coastal region, was devastating major levees breaches broke
out waters “gushed and tossed” homes and cars are playthings. People with money
bought houses on the upper side of the lower ninth ward while the less-privileged
had to stay back in the low lying areas and flood zone prone areas. The lower
ninth ward residents claim their neighborhood to be a “friendly community” were
people help one and another (Journal of American History). Lower ninth ward had
people from all communities and they get-together for their cultural events and
festivals. Extensive flooding at the lower ninth ward drew “national attention.”
Because the city is intertwined with water surrounding it, the lower ninth ward
faced horrible devastations; also the area was flooded with 20feet of water. On
one hand some residents couldn’t evacuate because they weren’t “well off”
neither did they own vehicles to move out, so they had to stay there and be a
part of that disaster while on the other hand few lower ninth ward residents
say, “Everyone seems to think the poor, lower income people that don’t do
anything [live here],” one resident claimed. “But they’re hard-working people down
here” (Journal of American History). Also the storm had a notable effect on the
city’s economy, its labor market dynamics, and its individual businesses. This disaster
also affected “low-income disaster survivors” and they need long term health
and mental services (American Journal of Orthopsychiatry). Hurricane Katrina was
one of the most “economically costly” hurricanes ever to strike the United
States and about 80 percent of the city
which was below the sea level was flooded, experts said $62.3 billion was
needed for emergency response and recovery needs (Monthly Labor Review). Lower ninth
ward of New Orleans “was ground zero” in the after math of hurricane Katrina
reports say only two third of residents are back at the lower ninth ward and it
still continues to be a “ghost town” (Journal of American History). In spite of
living comfortably, very few people like zeituon stayed back to take care of
the property and because he stayed back he was able to help other residents who
were less fortunate. In one of the videos on you tube; Zeitoun mentioned that
he was happy for what he did, he also said that he will “continue to do” the
same if any disaster takes place again. He says that, God’s given him the ability
to help others and he will continue to do that, no matter what. Some residents including
Zeitoun say that they love their community and they will continue to live
there. Some residents said, Life is “unquestionably difficult” there, but there
are also moments of profound joy. "You have to live here to have it in
your heart. And to know this is your home," said Stuart. From my
perspective I think people who live in the lower ninth ward love their community
and will do anything for it and finally I would like to conclude as one of the “proud”
lower ninth ward resident said, we also face the risk of another hurricane, but
there is a “spirit” in the Lower Ninth Ward that Hurricane Katrina could not
destroy (Journal of American History) I really appreciate the fact that they love their community but they should also realize the importance of their lives and can also think about how they can raise their standard of living and how they can make money, so that it could help them in the time of their crisis.
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Hi, Althea, my name is Junmin Li (Vince) in ENG101 class. I was given your essay to read and asked to give comments on your essay. You did a good job on writing this composition. You used a lot of citation, and maybe we just learned about how to do citation. However, first, I think you might add too much citation so that some of them just like drop citation. For example, “Hurricane Katrina was one of ……recovery needs (Monthly Labor Review).” In this citation, you do not have many explanations. Second, you might try to get information from different resources, rather than just from 2 resources. Third, why don’t you separate your essay into several paragraphs? That would be much clearer. Anyway, it is a nice essay, and I hope you can do it better and better.
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