Hello Class! This blog is a review of my blog 1 and 2 and as
suggested by a student who is training to be a tutor at the writing center gave
me comments to work on my blog and put my work in my own words. The comments
really helped me to improve on this blog. As we are discussing about, whether
or not New York City’s prepared for climate change. The article “New York Is Lagging as Seas and
Risks Rise, Critics Warn" New York Times.
Mayor Bloomberg
and other city officials are trying to take steps towards this issue, but they
are taking slow measures regarding this alarming issue. People living in low
lying areas, have high chances of getting flooded during any heavy rains. New York
officials are not contributing towards this preparation. (i.e. Con Edison). The
book “global warming reader” informs us about this threat. It’s a serious issue
to be noticed that could cripple New York, leaving hundreds of thousands homeless.
Are the New Yorkers really ready for this type of an alarming change? Are we
aware? No, because we do not have enough awareness about climate change and new
Yorkers do not take this seriously unless they know the seriousness of this
issue. As the earth’s temperature is rising it makes human life more difficult
and brings in insufficient amount of food and water, Global Warming Reader.
We the humans play a very important role in causing danger
to our planet and our ecosystem. The smog and many other toxic substances that evolve
around our atmosphere cause breathing problems. This is only because we were
not aware about the seriousness of climate change, awareness in schools,
colleges and in public places might help to address this issue. Children can be
taught to plant more trees and activities that might interest them so that they
understand, what climate change is. Mankind has expanded in such an astonishing
way that the Earth resources are being exploited. For example, throughout the
past three century population has increased tenfold to 6 billion and urbanization
has also increased tenfold having as consequence a draining of the fossil fuel,
Anthropocence. Most of the New Yorkers are not aware other population increase
or increase in urbanization because they do not realize the terrific outcome of
this matter.
To conclude and from my perspective, I strongly believe that
only “awareness” can help New Yorkers address the harmful effects of climate
change. If every individual changes their life style to a certain extent, they
make our planet a better place to live in. “it’s a million of small changes
that need to happen”, said Adam freed.
Hi Althea,
ReplyDeleteI’m been training to be a tutor in the writing center. I enjoy reading your blog 2 because your essay is well organized. I can tell that your essay is in the good order. In your first paragraph, you have brief introduction, main idea of the blog, clear summary and effective evidence. However, as an outsider reader, I can’t really tell if you use your own words to show the information.Sumeng Geo